Alexia Barbara Cordato
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Post by Alexia Barbara Cordato on Feb 24, 2003 10:49:23 GMT -5
Sprawled lazily beneath the Jasmine tree,
It’s scent gently lingering in the air.
Teasing my nostrils with each breath I take
Reminding me that it is there.
Branches swaying playfully,
It’s pedals dropping one by one.
Yet in this wonderful afternoon sun,
It has not but a care.
Tugging softly on its branches,
Just to see what it would do.
I realized I’ve crushed a blossom,
Within my fingertips.
I wish I could be as forgiving
As this stunning Jasmine tree.
Although I’ve taken precious life from it,
Beautiful fragrance it still gives me.
Alexia
2003
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Post by engarde on Feb 25, 2003 5:12:09 GMT -5
Personification is great here! I like how you ended this.
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Post by Alexia on Mar 8, 2003 18:13:44 GMT -5
Thank you. This was the thought that came to mind when I opened my hand and saw the crushed blossom.......this summer. I just had to put it to words.
Alexia
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 21:14:51 GMT -5
this poem is really sweet keep up the good work
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