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Post by MysticMind17 on Feb 24, 2003 1:22:43 GMT -5
Blending in with their surroundings Matching the outside world Leaving behind their wives Some leaving their boys and girls Fighting this battle to save us all America for which theyll die For the safety of us the people Fighting with excessive pride The hardest aspect of this is This sudden separation The one of which has brought me To this terrible feeling of desolation However, We, the people are very proud Of what you all have become Each and every one of you soldiers Making up the Army Of One
~Diana Brown
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Clyde
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Post by Clyde on Feb 24, 2003 22:56:39 GMT -5
Very good, I always enjoy tributes to heroes.
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Post by SwEeTdReAmS on Feb 24, 2003 23:16:47 GMT -5
heyhey gurly! you are SOO very talented! i'm glad to hear that your poems are being published!! that is great!! i just now really started writing poetry..but i love it..i hope that i can be as good as you one day! congrats!! luv ya!! talk to you soon
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 10, 2003 8:30:32 GMT -5
this was a really good poem
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