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MysticMind17
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Farwell Feb 24, 2003 1:21:48 GMT -5

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Post by MysticMind17 on Feb 24, 2003 1:21:48 GMT -5

Crystal moon
Broken glass
Wounded heart
Scars that last

Forgotten dreams
Unwanted soul
Senseless touch
A pretenders role

Harsh mouth sounds
Silenced tears
Angers flared
A hearts worst fear

Goodbye cruel love
One last pain
Perhaps one day
My heart will gain

~Diana Brown

SwEeTdReAmS been around the block .:+MuCh LuV 2 aLL+:. Posts: 142	Farwell Feb 26, 2003 23:25:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SwEeTdReAmS on Feb 26, 2003 23:25:24 GMT -5 wow i think that this poem is one of my favorites that you have written...you are great! luv ya!
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rubbanekk still rather new Posts: 25	Farwell Feb 26, 2003 23:30:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rubbanekk on Feb 26, 2003 23:30:33 GMT -5 I'm not really into love poems that much, but I did like this one very much.

engarde poet/Gmod Posts: 428	Farwell Feb 27, 2003 5:46:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by engarde on Feb 27, 2003 5:46:40 GMT -5 Nice connections!! Crystal...broken glass harsh mouth...tears I like it!
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Alexia mod team Posts: 1,026	Farwell Mar 1, 2003 21:43:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alexia on Mar 1, 2003 21:43:53 GMT -5 What a wonderful poem. Loved the ending. Thanks for sharing.
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Maryann22 poet/Gmod Posts: 721	Farwell Mar 10, 2003 7:12:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Maryann22 on Mar 10, 2003 7:12:23 GMT -5 i loved it

Post by MysticMind17 on Feb 24, 2003 1:21:48 GMT -5

Post by SwEeTdReAmS on Feb 26, 2003 23:25:24 GMT -5

Post by rubbanekk on Feb 26, 2003 23:30:33 GMT -5

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Post by Alexia on Mar 1, 2003 21:43:53 GMT -5

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