Going over Niagra Falls

[rubbanekk]

As my feet touch the water I can feel the cold
So many have tried, so far as i've been told
Not many have succeeded ther storys go untold
As my body goes with the current flow
what am I thinking? My fear begins to grow
It's too late, I can see the edge coming near
My heart starts pumping, My head grows with fear
The waters so cold, The current so strong
Everybody saying I shouldn't do this, This is so wrong
I can feel myself getting closer to the edge
Am I gonna survive, or end up with the dead
No matter what this has been a great experiance
Theres nothing wrong with wanting to experament
I feel myself falling, So I close my eyes tight
I open them to a very surprising sight
It's my dog licking all over my face
Must have been a dream, yet my hearts still a race

[rubbanekk]

If anybody has any comments please send good or bad, I would like to know.Thank you

[Maryann22]

i like the ending keep up the good work

[Alexia]

What a delightful poem......it put a smile on my face from ear to ear.....OMG....thank you so very much for sharing...

Alexia