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Post by MysticMind17 on Feb 23, 2003 22:13:30 GMT -5
if a rose could be a bud again a fantasy sorely sought to be able to go back is something that cant be bought
to change what we did wrong to return to fix and see to remedy the pain we caused are things that will never be
to run around like a little child rather than feeling weary pain to fall in love like before are dreams that we cant gain
to be able to go backwards as much as our hearts desired to feel as we once did would set our spirits higher
but a rose cant be a bud again its the trick of our stark lives though we understand life in reverse forward...we must strive.
~Diana Brown
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SwEeTdReAmS
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Post by SwEeTdReAmS on Feb 23, 2003 22:29:50 GMT -5
i LOVE all of your poems! you have so much talent!! talk to you soon!
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Clyde
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Post by Clyde on Feb 23, 2003 23:05:02 GMT -5
Well put, a very nice poem. Thank you.
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 10, 2003 8:59:56 GMT -5
nicely said
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Post by engarde on Mar 11, 2003 4:58:46 GMT -5
Yes, the chance to start over and not make the same mistakes.
Intriguing poem, thanks!
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