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Post by rubbanekk on Feb 23, 2003 1:29:34 GMT -5
As we all can be, We all should see
What is the meaning of eternity?
As winter ends and spring begins
Just one big cycle, going around again
Where does it start, Where does it end
Is the earth flat or does it bend?
How could it be that we are not in fear?
Not knowing how far the end is near
Is there an end? Is there eternity?
Why are we here? Why cant we see?
Is there such a thing as immortality?
Death is certain, Life is not
Life is heaven, Have we forgot?
Where do our souls go?
Is there any way for us to know?
So many questions, So little time
Some things we will never know lets keep that in mind!
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Post by engarde on Feb 23, 2003 6:28:17 GMT -5
"How could it be that we are not in fear?
Not knowing how far the end is near"
Interesting piece, I like how you didn't try and answer the questions you asked but left it up to the reader...thanks!
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Post by Clyde on Feb 23, 2003 19:56:16 GMT -5
Very nicely written, thank you.
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Post by rubbanekk on Feb 24, 2003 1:46:57 GMT -5
If anybody has any comments please send good or bad.Thank you
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Post by sarasnapps on Feb 24, 2003 3:30:43 GMT -5
I like this... To me it sounds as if you are puzzled by the questions yourself, or perhaps had to remind yourself of eternity and the promises of Heaven and Hell, life and death, good and bad, etc. I too think the questions should provoke thought, so trying to answer them just leaves you reading and not thinking
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 10, 2003 8:46:44 GMT -5
great poem (you shouldn't have to live with all those questions in your head, you should just live life to the fullest everyday and know that everything will turn out okay)
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Post by Alexia on Mar 11, 2003 19:35:55 GMT -5
Sure did leave me thinking. Life is a puzzle to me and I've spent most of my adult life trying to put the pieces together....but this poem made me realize a great deal....I'm not the only one trying .....Wow....I loved it...
Thank you
Alexia
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Post by nobodydatswho on Mar 11, 2003 20:27:16 GMT -5
ur an awsome writer.
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