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Post by romanticone1983 on Feb 23, 2003 0:38:40 GMT -5
wandering vagabond walks
trusting streets
no more drama. no more
drama.
this is his plea
this is his question
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Post by girlshapedgirl on Feb 23, 2003 2:46:38 GMT -5
i love the first line
wandering vagabond walks trusting streets
brilliant
i felt as though
there was more
to be said
like it could have
gone on longer
it still has
me thinking
about it though
rock on
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Post by engarde on Feb 23, 2003 6:24:45 GMT -5
Well done! I like the plea for no more drama, especially from a vagabond
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