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Post by Alexia on Feb 23, 2003 0:31:10 GMT -5
Laying there beside him, Her head upon his chest. Listening to his heartbeat, Gently thumping next to hers.
Bodies entwined together, Their skin ablaze with want. Knowing just a touch away, Contentment lays in wait.
Hands searching gently for precious places, Desires swelling with each tender touch. Lips parting ever so slightly, Awaiting tastes to come.
Their breaths become sporadic, Their bodies heave in time. Their minds become frenzied, As seduction takes it's place.
Lust and love create a path, They walk down through the night. Savouring every touch and taste, Until suddenly they unite.
Again her head upon his chest, Their eyes gently closed. Lips softly kissing their goodnights As oneness fills their souls.
Alexia Barbara Cordato
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Post by engarde on Feb 23, 2003 6:34:39 GMT -5
Wonderful! Sensual and tastful, I like how the ending almost reverts back to the beginning.
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Post by Antoinette on Feb 24, 2003 23:02:49 GMT -5
It was cool The ending moves -u-
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Post by Alexia on Mar 7, 2003 22:55:11 GMT -5
Thank you . Your words are much appreciated.
Alexia
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Post by millilou on Mar 8, 2003 21:46:43 GMT -5
I like this one a lot, nice!
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 21:11:09 GMT -5
nice work!!
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