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Post by Insomnia on Sept 23, 2004 8:52:30 GMT -5
Our existance is unnatural Like blood on snow And as we walk on the white The blooms weep and bow their heads in despair, while the skin in which we encase ourselves Erupts in a massof miniscule mountains as the air moves around us And the tresses on the backs of our necks stand tall like reeds in the wind... How the oaks look down on us Like the crucifix in the dust with the stink and sound of a life once had... A life that gave us leeway from the ominous ripples of humanity in the dark water in which we tread. One that gave us solace from the slow figures that levitate around us. The marriage of life and death in one such sacred place leaves an ambience that lingers like a fog forming false tears that settle on our cheeks; Without which our existance would be Tainted Unnatural, like blood-red diamonds scattered on the white...
And we walk on....
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_leash_
not so new anymore
shattered ocean
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Post by _leash_ on Sept 24, 2004 13:39:13 GMT -5
beautifully dark! i love the imagery and word choice in this piece. great work, insomnia. i hope to read more from you.
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