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Post by the eyes on Feb 20, 2003 21:20:12 GMT -5
dark are the eyes
of the old and the wise
who see right through the masters disguise
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Post by engarde on Feb 21, 2003 5:08:32 GMT -5
Short poems are tough, you did well getting your message across in few words. Thanks
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ResQ381
been around the block
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Post by ResQ381 on Feb 21, 2003 9:02:11 GMT -5
You have said a lot in few word. Great poem
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Clyde
been around the block
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Post by Clyde on Feb 21, 2003 21:36:22 GMT -5
Very good, thank you.
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Seferis
brand, spanking new
i am the passenger...
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Post by Seferis on Feb 24, 2003 7:52:22 GMT -5
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 10, 2003 8:41:25 GMT -5
well spoken for such a short poem
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Post by Alexia on Mar 11, 2003 19:37:22 GMT -5
So much said in so few words.......powerful....thankyou...
Alexia
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