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Post by Elisha on Apr 21, 2003 18:31:13 GMT -5
Never meant to hurt the dude I only gave him four. Watched him take the first two dry And told him then no more. Of course he didn't listen Now he's stuck on his knees. Screaming in the bathroom Somebody help me please! He had to take them all at once And now I'll have to pay. Never thought I'd take his life Oh what a perfect day! They don't know where he got them, No way I'll say a word. Pretend I never saw the guy, Pretend I haven't heard, I'll always keep the secret Because l'm the one to blame. They know that he was murdered But they'll never know my name.
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Post by rissed on Apr 21, 2003 22:20:56 GMT -5
i love this!!!!!!!!!!!i'm sorry that i keep on commenting on your poetry but i can't help it you write well.
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Post by Elisha on Apr 22, 2003 18:33:22 GMT -5
no don't be sorry! thank you so much, I'm really glad that someone appreciates my poems. It seems like you really understand what I'm trying to say and not many people do.
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Post by heatherzafeather on Apr 25, 2003 14:04:12 GMT -5
this one's awesome too
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Post by Maryann22 on May 6, 2003 23:43:22 GMT -5
I like it alot. Maryann22
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