ResQ381
been around the block
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Wait
Feb 18, 2003 10:53:42 GMT -5
Post by ResQ381 on Feb 18, 2003 10:53:42 GMT -5
I set and wait to see what tomorrow will bring. Thing I wish for or will there be sadness at my door. I do not know what tomorrow will hold. So I wait. To know the thing that will come. To see if the sun will shine. For we do not know if there will be a tomorrow. So I wait. If the sun dose rise in the morn. Then I will see what it as in store. For no one know just what might happen. So I wait. If tomorrow is a good day I will be happy all the day. If tomorrow brings sadness then I will be sad. But we do not know. So I wait. Live life for all its worth. For tomorrow may never come. So I wait.
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Wait
Feb 20, 2003 5:30:12 GMT -5
Post by engarde on Feb 20, 2003 5:30:12 GMT -5
Interesting use of "so I wait". Repeating a phrase within a poem can really add to the experience. I like how you repeated this
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