Down The Rabbit Hole

[Elisha]

Optimistic till I die
You'll find a way to make me cry
Only point of waking is simply just to sleep.
Say I'm just a stupid girl
Locked inside the big bad world
The rabbit hole I've fallen in is suddenly too deep.
Spinning faster by myself
Throw away my mental health
I'm breathing and I'm living in someone elses dream.
You can't know what this means to me
Fought so long to finally see
Use the only thing that's left, another dried up scream.

[Maryann22]

this poem is good but not as good as some of the other ones that I have read of yours. Maryann22

[Elisha]

I agree, it's not one of my best. It's one of the oldest ones I have, I think I wrote it when I was twelve or so. I was in the sixth grade so it was either twelve or thirteen I entered it into a contest for school and it didn't win but the tacher liked it.