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Apr 21, 2003 0:48:04 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on Apr 21, 2003 0:48:04 GMT -5
What we had, our perfect dream, The day it fell away. Burned into my memory, The things you used to say. I still remember everything, I can't forget your face. The pain, it tears me back into That old familiar place. The day you dragged me crying Out where no one else would hear. The day you screamed I love you With the steel up to your ear. A scene I'll see forever See you standing in the rain. The day you screamed I love you Made me watch you end your pain.
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Apr 22, 2003 21:13:52 GMT -5
Post by heatherzafeather on Apr 22, 2003 21:13:52 GMT -5
Good one, Elisha.
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sanket
still rather new
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Apr 26, 2003 1:37:14 GMT -5
Post by sanket on Apr 26, 2003 1:37:14 GMT -5
good job keep it up
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May 6, 2003 23:34:48 GMT -5
Post by Maryann22 on May 6, 2003 23:34:48 GMT -5
great poem. Maryann22
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