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Post by wildguy2006 on Feb 8, 2003 15:15:23 GMT -5
Your picture which I have in hand By itself could never stand For in dimensions it does lack The third and foremost of the pack It will not kiss me on command It can not love me on demand And warmth, it can never imbue To this pour soul who yearns for you Torture me no more, my sweet Pictures can’t such passions treat And if they burn like mine do now They need to be relieved some how Thus to the truth I do adhere That only you, my doctor dear In three dimensions, can so clear This burning which is so severe So fly to me – do not delay I cannot wait another day And free me from these torments of This raging three-dimension love
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Post by engarde on Feb 11, 2003 8:53:27 GMT -5
I love the ending, "raging" is such a perfect word!
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Clyde
been around the block
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Post by Clyde on Feb 21, 2003 20:31:08 GMT -5
Good job, thanks.
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