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Post by aj on Apr 28, 2004 18:53:29 GMT -5
Write a poem, in any form that includes these words: messenger, firmament, expanse, reveal and dormant It's ok to pluralize or augment the words as you see fit. Good luck! -AJ |
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Post by aj on Apr 30, 2004 16:40:21 GMT -5
Polite MessengerThe blackest expanse of starry night gives way to a firmament of cerulean. Billoughy clouds part and reveal the moment. And now comes our polite messenger, the dawn to sweetly glide above and rouse the dormant world. Your turn, Jaysie! 
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Post by Jaysie on May 3, 2004 11:47:16 GMT -5
Shooting Star
Galaxies away
glows the firmament,
a messenger of celestial consolation
revealing the reception
of my hinged hope across
this expanding black expanse.
My worries shall
fall down around me
to reside in dormancy tonight as
my luminary feeds me hope
in its firework-ballet
across the sky.
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Post by aj on May 3, 2004 16:29:35 GMT -5
And you thought you couldn't do it.
Nice job, Jaysie!
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Post by Jaysie on May 4, 2004 8:17:59 GMT -5
Thanks, AJ. I failed to complete this assignment over the weekend, but when I read yours Monday morning, I was inspired. |
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Post by aj on May 4, 2004 17:19:42 GMT -5
Aww.
I'm honored.
I liked your effort very much.
Nicely done, sweetie.
AJ
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Reality Bytes
been around the block
I spend too much time on my computer...
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Post by Reality Bytes on May 9, 2004 22:04:04 GMT -5
Is it that we seek a messenger?
Or is it that we seek firmament?
But as we climb to the endless expanse,
We must reveal to our selve who we are.
Lest we be left dormant to the power of self.
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Post by aj on May 9, 2004 22:16:36 GMT -5
Wow. Very nice indeed, Reality. Good work! -AJ |
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