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Jun 2, 2003 23:42:06 GMT -5
Post by romanticone1983 on Jun 2, 2003 23:42:06 GMT -5
caress this painful soul as it reaches for any heart to love perpetually caress the tears which fall like a rain storm hope holds this storm shall fall and ease as i rise from the break and i shall dry the pain
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Jun 3, 2003 0:27:59 GMT -5
Post by Jaysie on Jun 3, 2003 0:27:59 GMT -5
I love the opposition of the first and last lines.
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Jun 3, 2003 8:29:31 GMT -5
Post by Restless on Jun 3, 2003 8:29:31 GMT -5
Nice write pat!!!! I liked this one!
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Jun 3, 2003 11:52:42 GMT -5
Post by romanticone1983 on Jun 3, 2003 11:52:42 GMT -5
thanks
iim gonna try and post more
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Jun 5, 2003 22:19:55 GMT -5
Post by Alexia on Jun 5, 2003 22:19:55 GMT -5
Ohhhhhhh Pat!!!! This is absolutely beautiful....so touching.......OMG..."Caress this painful soul as it reaches for any heart to love perpetually".......that just punched a hole in my heart.......beautiful...beautiful....beautiful.... Thank you for sharing this one...Great Write!!!!!
Sincerely
Alexia
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