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Post by Insomnia on Aug 29, 2004 4:50:04 GMT -5
Butterfly Behind The Glass
Butterfly behind the glass. Beautiful, but trapped Move your wings Seduce the air Damp… And warm…
Voiceless cocoon Life locked inside an innocent womb Waiting ‘til the hour When you can release yourself… Breathe…
Embrace the wind Dance, to imagined music Pierce the wind … Blur of colour Take your first breath Climb… Higher… Higher… Higher.
Butterfly behind the glass. Move your wings Seduce the air….
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fallingxroses
still rather new
you were the last good thing about this part of town.
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Post by fallingxroses on Aug 29, 2004 18:26:59 GMT -5
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fallingxroses
still rather new
you were the last good thing about this part of town.
Posts: 25
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Post by fallingxroses on Aug 29, 2004 18:28:16 GMT -5
^^ sorry about that =/
what i WANTED to say was that i really liked your poem. it had an airy feel to it but the imagery was great.
plus i like butterflies =)
keep on writing.
kelly
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Post by Jaysie on Aug 30, 2004 7:53:56 GMT -5
very nice ideed! ~jaysie infringing on the teen board
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_leash_
not so new anymore
shattered ocean
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Post by _leash_ on Sept 24, 2004 14:10:24 GMT -5
wonderful work! i loved the imagery and mood of this piece. beautifully sad.
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