Cello--One of Mine

[Insomnia]

I'm just looking for a bit of advice here guys. I was just wondering whether or not this sounds good or not. Be gentle okay?



Cello...

Let your sound fill the room that
Is my soul
Release your dry tears
Rid us of our strength
Cry for us
Take our life force
With every brush of thread against thread
Let us bear the pain of friction
Let us hear the death of silence
Remind us of our existence as beings
With emotion…
That we can appreciate such beauty

Your majesty is
Overpowering
Your language is hypnotic
Captivating…enchanting…

Your sound
Gloomy and dismal yet so
Beautiful
It exposes one
Leaving the soul naked…unmasking who we are
Echoing in one’s ears long after the last note
Has been played

Cello...

With every brush of thread against thread
Take away the need to hide
Expose us with your magnificence
#nosmileys

[fallingxroses]

i really loved it actually.

you used very good imagery words
and i felt like i was actually in your
poem.

good job =)

-kelly

[Jaysie]

Let us bear the pain of friction
Let us hear the death of silence

beautiful, beautiful...