lilphotogal
still rather new
...and each seperate dying ember wroght it's ghost upon the floor
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Post by lilphotogal on Aug 22, 2004 19:06:22 GMT -5
I Went Beyond Death Christiana Lee
I passed by the curtain The tunnel and the light Daring to make certain The home of wrong and right
First to the heavens go I gravitated there Where we reap what we sew Our blind faith from thin air
Set in a state of awe Perfect in every way A clock is what I saw Marking not time of day
The handless clock of God Rules O so perfectly Now I leave joys quarters For damned eternity
Forever is two-fold Hades attests to that So dare I be so bold To look into the vat
Satan has a clock too But handless it is not Ticking echoes in you This is a sinner’s lot
I went beyond death and found eternal light, I went beyond death and found eternal night
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Post by melissa16 on Aug 29, 2004 5:38:46 GMT -5
one word...COOL!! but eerie too...
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_leash_
not so new anymore
shattered ocean
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Post by _leash_ on Sept 24, 2004 13:59:17 GMT -5
interesting.. you have a very different style than most. intriguing subject matter.
passed. that was really bothering me for some reason..
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lilphotogal
still rather new
...and each seperate dying ember wroght it's ghost upon the floor
Posts: 35
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Post by lilphotogal on Mar 9, 2005 23:37:06 GMT -5
ok, fixed spelling/grammer prob, never liked spelling anyway.
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