Warped and Twizted

[XtearsX]

Harsh words and voilent blows
Hidden secrets nobody knows
Eveys are open hands are fisted
Deep inside im warped and twizted
So many tricks and so many lies
Too many whens and too many whys
Nobodys special nobodys gifted
Im just me, warped and twizted
Sleeping awake and choking on a dream
Listening loudly to a silent sceram
Call my mind the numbers unlisted
Lost in someone so warpend and twizted
On my knees, alive but dead
Look at the invisible blood ive bled
Im not gone, my mind has drifted
Dont expect much, Im warped and twizted
Burt out, washed, empty, and hollow
Today is just yesterdays tomorrow
The sun died, out the ashes sifted
Im still here warped and twizted

[aj]

So sad. But so easy to relate to.
Thanks for sharing.
Good work.

-AJ

[Jaysie]

i really liked this line:

Today is just yesterdays tomorrow


welcome to PA!!!

[XtearsX]

thanx for all the comments i had to explain the line todays just yesterdays tomorrow to most people im glad that u understood it! Im glad that yall liked me poem!! Thanx!! ;D

[rsautter]

yeah...it is a great poem...but its copied...its on other sites. it was posted on gothictears.com by seven different people and seeing that that site closed down this month and people couldnt post poems for about 5 months, i have to wonder how they could of copied you.

[Jaysie]

Perhaps this poem is not copied. The rational logic would be that the author chose to post it on more than one site. Poets who want their work critqued often post on multiple sites.

Perhaps since the afore-mentioned site has closed the author chose to repost it here under a novel pen name.

[rsautter]

how is it rational logic that seven DIFFERENT people would have the SAME poem on the site?

[ugaalltheway]

I just love all of the opposites of this poem cool style.

[XtearsX]

Well i can asure you that i am the true author of this poem and i have posted it on a few sites besides this one so i dont know who copied me but.....w/e if they choose to do so thats their business

[Jaysie]

rsautter said:

how is it rational logic that seven DIFFERENT people would have the SAME poem on the site?

/shrug

in a court of law, or even in just the real world, accusations with no evidence hold very little weight.

also, seven people recycling the same poem on one site seems like it should have been an issue for the administrators of that forum. plagiarism should never be taken lightly.

[Danielle6500]

I LOVE this poem it's the kind that just grabs ahold and pulls you in Easy to relate to and awesome to read
Great job

[melissa16]

it has the best rhythm ever! really, this is great and relateable!!
(i really don't care who wrote it, the fact remains that it is an awesome poem, and if you say it's you i take your word for it!)

[write522]

it is a great poem and i do agree with the fact that poets soemtimes post their work on more than one site so perhaps we should not speak on things that we are not 100%sure about...or else we look stupid

[6ftUnder]

well then at least theyre looking stupid in front of ppl who dont know them...

[JeNn]

are you sure this is ur poem!!!? because ive read this same exact poem in another poetry site called creativepoems.com