XtearsX
newbie
Its funny how a heart is two tear drops upside down...
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Alone
Jun 5, 2004 10:39:57 GMT -5
Post by XtearsX on Jun 5, 2004 10:39:57 GMT -5
Blank
Was the expression she wore
Tears
She cried when she couldnt take it anymore
Alone
A mere stranger to the world
Dying
Is what she was inside
Lost
She always had to hide
Weak
Even when she gives it her all
Finished
Shes not afraid to fall
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Alone
Jun 5, 2004 22:54:57 GMT -5
Post by aj on Jun 5, 2004 22:54:57 GMT -5
Nicely done.
Welcome to the site! I hope you
enjoy it here.
-AJ
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Unknown
newbie
What a wonderful world we live in....
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Alone
Jun 5, 2004 23:55:15 GMT -5
Post by Unknown on Jun 5, 2004 23:55:15 GMT -5
I liked it bunches. (by the way im new too)
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XtearsX
newbie
Its funny how a heart is two tear drops upside down...
Posts: 14
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Alone
Jun 7, 2004 13:29:16 GMT -5
Post by XtearsX on Jun 7, 2004 13:29:16 GMT -5
Thanx everyone i wrote this poem when i was down and didnt think anyone cared thats when i write most my poetry i dont think i have one that was written by me that was a happy one! Anyways thanx for the comments
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