Rip Me

Leeann
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Rip Me Apr 13, 2003 20:03:47 GMT -5

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Post by Leeann on Apr 13, 2003 20:03:47 GMT -5

Rip me apart, review what's inside
Rip me apart I've got nothing to hide.
Tear me to pieces and laugh at my pain
Just know I can't feel it cuz I've gone insane.
Slice through the flesh and demolish my heart
You know that you want it, just rip me apart.
Laugh to yourself and sit watching me bleed.
Just watch and deny me the one thing I need.
So long I've been trapped, enslaved by your face
Rip me apart, make me free from this place.

Last Edit: Apr 16, 2003 19:49:43 GMT -5 by aj

aj Guest	Rip Me Apr 16, 2003 19:51:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by aj on Apr 16, 2003 19:51:08 GMT -5 Nice work. It was raw and intense. You should join, Leeann. This place is a great outlet.

TrappedDespair been around the block How did it come to this... Posts: 116	Rip Me Apr 19, 2003 0:14:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by TrappedDespair on Apr 19, 2003 0:14:03 GMT -5 awesome... just awesome
	The fever, the focus. The reasons that I had to believe you weren't too hard to sell. Die young and save yourself. The tickle, the taste of... It used to be the reason I breathed but now it's choking me up. Die young and save yourself.

Elisha poet Posts: 297	Rip Me Apr 19, 2003 23:02:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elisha on Apr 19, 2003 23:02:40 GMT -5 Great poem, leann. I think I've read some of your other poems around the site, did you write the one in the all types section? murdered a addict or something like that? it was awesome too.
	When the night is almost over, just before the moon goes down The wings of waking angels echo softly all around

Post by Leeann on Apr 13, 2003 20:03:47 GMT -5

Post by aj on Apr 16, 2003 19:51:08 GMT -5

Post by TrappedDespair on Apr 19, 2003 0:14:03 GMT -5

Post by Elisha on Apr 19, 2003 23:02:40 GMT -5