tk4ever
still rather new
I'm the ruler of the underworld, yet a slave to modern society.
Posts: 28
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Alone
Mar 17, 2004 11:39:09 GMT -5
Post by tk4ever on Mar 17, 2004 11:39:09 GMT -5
Darkness is all I see Surrounded by thee I have no reason,I have no ryhm I don't want to live this life It's like im digging myself into a pit of no escape Laying on a bed of nails Looking out into the hail Where the black spiders live their lives of disguise With no hearts to break No days to dwell I the dark,dark nights
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tk4ever
still rather new
I'm the ruler of the underworld, yet a slave to modern society.
Posts: 28
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Alone
Mar 17, 2004 11:40:21 GMT -5
Post by tk4ever on Mar 17, 2004 11:40:21 GMT -5
Hey! that's my poem. Hope you like it....considering that I wrote it when I was half asleep, it turned out alrigh...NEED FEEDBACK!
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Alone
Mar 18, 2004 16:36:04 GMT -5
Post by ~Erosion of the physco mind~ on Mar 18, 2004 16:36:04 GMT -5
that was chill!! i liked it...as alwayz! lol.....anywayz ya it was good!
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