caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
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Post by caged on Apr 8, 2003 20:24:31 GMT -5
Am I here?
or am I a figment of your imagination?
Am I here?
or am I just a soul lost in space
Am I here?
or am I a hope, a dream, a wish
Am I here?
or am I already dead and gone
Am I here?
maybe or maybe I am just a faint memory
soon to be forgotten
but I'm unsure
so I ask
Am I here?
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Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:05:56 GMT -5
very well written caged. i like your style!
but don't forget that you are here.
you are coz i can see oyu!
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Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:06:29 GMT -5
very well written caged. i like your style!
but don't forget that you are here.
you are coz i can see you!
and i'll see ya at lunch mateee
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Post by poetgrl57 on Apr 8, 2003 22:16:50 GMT -5
I would have to say that was a wonerful, emotional poem... I really liked it, then again I have liked all your poems so far.
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Post by unburntflame on May 29, 2003 2:08:54 GMT -5
yep. you're here. just had to check, but you're here.
I see you!!!!!
ubfl
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Post by anticaged on May 29, 2003 23:10:00 GMT -5
nice work
you have a good style
like your name!!!
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Post by 'the'*devil* on Jun 1, 2003 23:42:26 GMT -5
yep ure here!!!!!!!!!!! i can see u!!!!!!!! lol really good caged!
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on Jun 2, 2003 3:56:05 GMT -5
course you're here baby you still give me hugs and that is definitely PHYSICAL CONTACT Keep posting coz i love your poems Tiny  |
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