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Apr 8, 2003 0:17:38 GMT -5
Post by poetgrl57 on Apr 8, 2003 0:17:38 GMT -5
Sniffing, puffing, Inhauling Getting High Getting Drunk push me aside I am just a teenage punk F**K society You all just dismiss reality Oops, did I use to much profanity I am in angony but yet you question my sanity Darkness is creeping you all just keep dreaming a single tear runs down my face I push it aside it leaves no trace Is this weed I just smoked laced? Or do you all think I'm the nut case When the weed smoke starts clearing thats when I start fearing Everyone is f**king with my head would it be better if I were just dead Going insane Trapped in this world with a ball and chain
(Copyright of Amanda McGehee)
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caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
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Apr 8, 2003 0:45:33 GMT -5
Post by caged on Apr 8, 2003 0:45:33 GMT -5
I like your poem it's easy to relate to and has alot of things that trigger thoughts in it I will look forward to reading some more of your work soon
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Apr 8, 2003 11:08:08 GMT -5
Post by Maryann22 on Apr 8, 2003 11:08:08 GMT -5
I liked this one alot keep up the great work. Maryann22
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Apr 8, 2003 17:28:49 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on Apr 8, 2003 17:28:49 GMT -5
I really really like this poem. You write really good stuff with meaning, not just a bunch of pretty crap to make people say oh isn't that sweet. You write about things a lot of people can relate to and thats really cool. I would really like to see what else you write.
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Apr 8, 2003 21:09:32 GMT -5
Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:09:32 GMT -5
i like it.i always make sure i read your poetry. this one's different, has more of a modern theme i reckon.
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May 29, 2003 2:03:19 GMT -5
Post by unburntflame on May 29, 2003 2:03:19 GMT -5
very teenage and modern. good write!
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