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Elisha
poet

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Magic Spell Apr 5, 2003 21:57:09 GMT -5

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Post by Elisha on Apr 5, 2003 21:57:09 GMT -5

Float out of my body
Now summon up your face
Scream your name and hope you hear me
Through this sleeping space
Empty mind and motionless
Look into your eyes
And pour my dream into your brain
I take off my disguise
So you can see my unmasked face
As I tell you how I feel
I hope my dream is good enough
We could have something real
Burn into your memory
To last when you awake
So when you look into my eyes
You'll see it wasn't fake

When the night is almost over, just before the moon goes down
The wings of waking angels echo softly all around

Maryann22 poet/Gmod Posts: 721	Magic Spell Apr 6, 2003 9:36:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Maryann22 on Apr 6, 2003 9:36:13 GMT -5 I think this poem still needs alittle bit of work. Maryann22

aj Guest	Magic Spell Apr 6, 2003 12:10:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by aj on Apr 6, 2003 12:10:19 GMT -5 I liked it, Elisha.

poetgrl57 newbie Posts: 22	Magic Spell Apr 8, 2003 0:30:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by poetgrl57 on Apr 8, 2003 0:30:31 GMT -5 Your poems are deep and intense and I really like them. You are a very talented poet.

rissed poet you say i'm a witch like it's a bad thing! Posts: 234	Magic Spell Apr 8, 2003 21:42:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:42:02 GMT -5 very very beautiful. yet another poem i can relate to!
	it's wise to look ahead, but foolish to see further than you can look.

Elisha poet Posts: 297	Magic Spell Apr 8, 2003 22:29:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elisha on Apr 8, 2003 22:29:15 GMT -5 aww thank you so much guys I'm really glad you liked it ;D
	When the night is almost over, just before the moon goes down The wings of waking angels echo softly all around

Post by Elisha on Apr 5, 2003 21:57:09 GMT -5

Post by Maryann22 on Apr 6, 2003 9:36:13 GMT -5

Post by aj on Apr 6, 2003 12:10:19 GMT -5

Post by poetgrl57 on Apr 8, 2003 0:30:31 GMT -5

Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:42:02 GMT -5

Post by Elisha on Apr 8, 2003 22:29:15 GMT -5