Break of Eden

iggy018 brand, spanking new Posts: 2	Break of Eden Jul 10, 2012 22:10:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by iggy018 on Jul 10, 2012 22:10:10 GMT -5 The static dawn breaks The serious shine I've seen it's head loom in the night Kicking its heels But the ant creeps And the spider crawls And the river bends And nothing changes.
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spvr brand, spanking new Posts: 2	Break of Eden Jul 10, 2012 22:22:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by spvr on Jul 10, 2012 22:22:43 GMT -5 I like the approach. Interesting and effective.

water4545 newbie Posts: 14	Break of Eden Jul 16, 2012 11:08:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by water4545 on Jul 16, 2012 11:08:20 GMT -5 despite its concise nature i think the poem delivers big time. very nice to read.
	"now that I've tasted blood, now this wine seems to thin."

water4545 newbie Posts: 14	Break of Eden Jul 16, 2012 11:13:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by water4545 on Jul 16, 2012 11:13:53 GMT -5 when i read serious i think of "sirius" a bright dawn time star that rises before the sun.
	"now that I've tasted blood, now this wine seems to thin."