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Post by ghostpoet504 on Mar 3, 2012 21:00:59 GMT -5
I Am I am depressed but loved I wonder what would happen if I died I hear death calling me I see my friends hanging up the phone I want to be free I am depressed but loved
I pretend not feel pain I feel everything now I touch death's hand almost I worry that one day i will succeed I cry almost every night again I am depressed but loved
I understand how I can hurt you I say I will keep you away from the darkness in me I dream that I can actually keep my promise I try to be a better person for you I hope that I will never hurt you I am depressed but loved
I was bored and I felt like this kinda explained how it felt to want death but having so many friends to be afraid of what may happen to them after
feedback please
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Post by forgetme on May 22, 2014 8:18:39 GMT -5
I feel the exact same way. And I really like that you don't bluntly explain the line "I am depressed but loved" in the poem.
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