TKei
been around the block
"Some wrongs we must hide, lest we expose our honour." Vauvenargues
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Post by TKei on Jan 5, 2012 0:51:10 GMT -5
Still Alone
Still alone.
Even after knowing you
For all of these years
I look at you
And I notice
You're still alone
A lost lover
Or a love that was lost
Separation is all you know
And it isn't getting better
Still alone.
Thinking of you
And wishing you were here
Knowing all along
You don't even see me
But I see you
More than anyone else
I see more in you
It's better than perfect
Still alone.
Still apart.
Still unknown,
And unloved.
Or so we think.
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Post by pharaoh1992 on Jan 5, 2012 2:47:58 GMT -5
Your short poem speaks to me at high volumes. I like it.
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TKei
been around the block
"Some wrongs we must hide, lest we expose our honour." Vauvenargues
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Post by TKei on Jan 5, 2012 8:16:03 GMT -5
Thank you, good sir. I hope it was easy enough to understand.
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Post by pharaoh1992 on Jan 6, 2012 3:37:44 GMT -5
It was in fact, easy to comprehend.
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Post by ghubbard on Jan 18, 2012 22:32:02 GMT -5
great ending. very deep and true. we dont know how our ex really feels, but the best thing we can do is focus on making ourselves happy. There is no better revenge than happiness.
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TKei
been around the block
"Some wrongs we must hide, lest we expose our honour." Vauvenargues
Posts: 128
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Post by TKei on Jan 20, 2012 7:53:25 GMT -5
It isn't about an ex. It's about someone I haven't seen in months, or spoken to in years.
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Post by pharaoh1992 on Mar 15, 2014 23:23:41 GMT -5
Wow. My first thought believe it or not when I first read this over two years ago was that it was about someone close to you.
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