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May 28, 2003 21:26:38 GMT -5
Post by Alexia on May 28, 2003 21:26:38 GMT -5
WOWWWWWWWWW!!!! Great!
Alexia
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May 28, 2003 21:33:49 GMT -5
Post by Jaysie on May 28, 2003 21:33:49 GMT -5
Amazing, AJ! I like it!
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Post by Yellie on Jun 6, 2003 7:09:30 GMT -5
Like the most amazing sandcastle in love with the deadly touch of the sea....
No matter how much we change our form...it is never enough before we disappeare, for some people only in love with them selves,
before the lady who they love to...
like the rib once freed from Adams flesh, set back into place under his skin....
becomes nothing which they themselves are not...
Or at least that is the angry thought that enters my mind reading that someone as beautiful as you should have someone in your life demanding changes inside you for his love...great poem though!
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paxia
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Jun 7, 2003 15:33:28 GMT -5
Post by paxia on Jun 7, 2003 15:33:28 GMT -5
AWESOME, AJ!!! I like how all of a sudden, after the full description "I bend I turn, twist, foldI let go and divide
I peel away, crumble, subside" all of a sudden, you say "for you" neat-o!!!
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Oct 22, 2005 20:09:31 GMT -5
Post by Debo on Oct 22, 2005 20:09:31 GMT -5
Now that was just GREAT!!!!
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