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River
Feb 24, 2003 23:28:45 GMT -5
Post by SimplyTree on Feb 24, 2003 23:28:45 GMT -5
river
swiftly rolling
carry away my tears
upon your current bring me joy
at last
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River
Feb 25, 2003 5:32:20 GMT -5
Post by engarde on Feb 25, 2003 5:32:20 GMT -5
Excellent! A good reminder how the river can run both ways.
Do you like writing this form of poetry?
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River
Feb 25, 2003 11:17:41 GMT -5
Post by SimplyTree on Feb 25, 2003 11:17:41 GMT -5
I love writing cinquains! Thanks for your kind reply!
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River
Mar 9, 2003 20:13:50 GMT -5
Post by millilou on Mar 9, 2003 20:13:50 GMT -5
Good poem. I like this one a lot. I'm new to Cinquain but find it most rewarding.  |
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River
Mar 10, 2003 1:06:51 GMT -5
Post by SimplyTree on Mar 10, 2003 1:06:51 GMT -5
Thank you Milli! Cinquain can be very rewarding....
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River
Mar 14, 2003 16:23:44 GMT -5
Post by Maryann22 on Mar 14, 2003 16:23:44 GMT -5
this is a great cinquain keep up the nice work
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River
Mar 14, 2003 22:06:01 GMT -5
Post by SimplyTree on Mar 14, 2003 22:06:01 GMT -5
Thank you MaryAnn and you keep up the good work too!!!
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River
May 14, 2003 22:50:53 GMT -5
Post by Restless on May 14, 2003 22:50:53 GMT -5
This is one word.................beautiful!
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River
May 15, 2003 19:47:30 GMT -5
Post by SimplyTree on May 15, 2003 19:47:30 GMT -5
Thank you so very much.....Tree
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