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rhubarb Guest	renewal Mar 30, 2003 16:01:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by rhubarb on Mar 30, 2003 16:01:35 GMT -5 a love once lost found again in the shadow of my beating heart haiku is totally new to me..just trying my hand at it. any feedback would really help...

ShInE poet "If you turn off the sun I'm still gonna ShInE" - J.M. Posts: 283	renewal Apr 4, 2003 16:20:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ShInE on Apr 4, 2003 16:20:32 GMT -5 nice job
	Everybody's just a stranger That's the danger of going my own way I guess it's the price I have to pay - J. Mayer