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Post by aj on Feb 24, 2003 10:57:03 GMT -5
I see still water.
I feel the serenity
of a predator.
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Post by engarde on Feb 25, 2003 5:26:48 GMT -5
Interesting connection...serenity and predator. I can feel you waiting, watching, ready to pounce
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Post by Yellie on Feb 28, 2003 15:49:41 GMT -5
In the stillness... one knows that it's coming.
Your poem gave me goosebumps...in a very good way (: Thank you for bringing me there!
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Post by aj on Feb 28, 2003 16:34:33 GMT -5
Give it a try, Yellie. I think you like it. You have a talent for imagery.
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