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Post by millilou on Feb 21, 2003 18:29:44 GMT -5
THE DEPTH OF SUMMER
Perspiration falls
in one unhindered droplet
to hot to bother
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Post by engarde on Feb 23, 2003 7:26:38 GMT -5
Yes, before you know it summer will be here and we'll be longing for fall...
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Post by aj on Feb 23, 2003 8:40:42 GMT -5
And I have a car load of autumn haiku too!
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Post by jupiter on Feb 23, 2003 19:41:02 GMT -5
Nice Imagery! I can feel the heat...thanks, I needed that on a cold winter's day.
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Post by Yellie on Feb 28, 2003 19:15:09 GMT -5
Transcending the walls of rain, the dry heat of your poem enters my mind. Mmmmmmmm
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Post by millilou on Mar 5, 2003 18:27:58 GMT -5
I'm longing for the summer, too. It's cold here in Georgia!!!
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gMt
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Post by gMt on Mar 9, 2003 20:37:31 GMT -5
oh yeah the good
ole summer time
with the sun so hot
gMt
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Post by Alexia on Mar 16, 2003 16:05:37 GMT -5
Oh how I wish that droplet would hurry up and get here. I loved the way this made me feel....I could see myself on that hammock already........Really nice words...thanks for sharing
Alexia
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Post by millilou on Mar 16, 2003 20:21:52 GMT -5
Thank you Alexia...I'm waiting for that summer day myself!!
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