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Post by aj on Feb 18, 2003 10:52:28 GMT -5
Big brown bear at play
Ursine dreams of salmon flesh
and long winter naps
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Post by engarde on Feb 25, 2003 5:30:09 GMT -5
I found it!
I like it, simple, carefree and being a bear!
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Post by aj on Feb 25, 2003 10:04:10 GMT -5
I wrote the hiaku after watching a special with my husband who loves bears.
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Post by Yellie on Feb 28, 2003 19:20:33 GMT -5
your poem takes me back to Canada...
a dry day...me and a black bear by the river...starring at each other...
me wanting to be as complete as him,
him wanting to eat me.
simple and strong.
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