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Jaysie poet poet/mod "If I had all the words, I would write myself out of here" Posts: 1,249	No Answer Jun 17, 2003 18:38:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jaysie on Jun 17, 2003 18:38:07 GMT -5 Thick smoke The weight of time Stagnant film on my limbs Brushed aside by the movements made Cloudy halos fade in to something new Why have you never said the words Palms up, my empty hands Slicing our breath Thick smoke
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Alexia mod team Posts: 1,026	No Answer Jun 17, 2003 19:41:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alexia on Jun 17, 2003 19:41:22 GMT -5 As always Jay......great work. I'll be back, gotta go read it over again. Alexia Oh....."Cloudy halos fade into something new".....I like that!
	Wisdom is just a word. Knowing when to be wise is a power. Understanding when to share wisdom is a gift.

onemorething mod team Posts: 507	No Answer Jun 17, 2003 22:41:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by onemorething on Jun 17, 2003 22:41:26 GMT -5 this was incredible, kid! I can actually see the smoke hanging on the air between you two. awesome!

Jaysie poet poet/mod "If I had all the words, I would write myself out of here" Posts: 1,249	No Answer Jun 19, 2003 8:52:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jaysie on Jun 19, 2003 8:52:40 GMT -5 Thank you both. This one means a lot to me and so your comments on this mean sooooo much!! Thanks!!
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Restless mod team Posts: 579	No Answer Jul 7, 2003 19:27:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Restless on Jul 7, 2003 19:27:25 GMT -5 I love this one Jay......dark and very very meaningful. "Stagnant film on my limbs" is the best descriptive line I have read from you in a long time! Loved it!
	"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up.....these are the best days of our lives. The only thing that matters is just following your heart, and eventually you will get it right" -Ataris-