|
|
Post by ShInE on Jun 2, 2003 15:08:01 GMT -5
Waiting
Fifteen minutes
Gone by since it ended
I thought that it would take me ten
To get over my decision to leave
Can the guilt go on much longer?
Thought it would be easy
Looks like i'm still
Waiting
|
|
|
|
Post by Jaysie on Jun 5, 2003 14:39:43 GMT -5
I liked this, Shine!. I keep finding that matters of the heart always take much longer than I expected!
|
|
|
|
Post by Restless on Jun 5, 2003 22:03:14 GMT -5
wow shine........nicely done. this brought me back to a waiting game I played once........so sad, but well written!
|
|
|
|
Post by Alexia on Jun 5, 2003 22:11:33 GMT -5
Sad how minutes can seem like hours............well said Shine. Good work, I enjoyed this.
Alexia
|
|
|
|
Post by ShInE on Jun 6, 2003 17:09:57 GMT -5
thank you all for your wonderful comments
|
|
paxia
been around the block
Posts: 118
|
Post by paxia on Jun 7, 2003 15:53:33 GMT -5
Good write, SHinE.
|
|
|
|
Post by unburntflame on Jun 7, 2003 21:00:31 GMT -5
i was ordered to read this by Jaysie......and by gosh i'm glad i did!! that is so beautiful.....i really love it!! (she's trying to teach me to write rictameter properly...hehehe) and this sure sets a good example. well done!!!
|
|
|
|
Post by ShInE on Jun 8, 2003 5:11:38 GMT -5
lmao!! glad you liked it..
hey Jaysie..want a new job as my PR agent? ;D
|
|
|
|
Post by Jaysie on Jun 8, 2003 18:24:36 GMT -5
Ubfl- I'm glad you read this!! ;D
And Shine, you don't need a PR agent, your words sell themself! Keep up the great work, girl! ;D
|
|
|
|
Post by onemorething on Jun 11, 2003 16:01:35 GMT -5
i know that feeling. good job, shine.
|
|
