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Post by Restless on May 27, 2003 21:21:39 GMT -5
Foggy
Haze closes in
Smoke encircles the vines
of veins that are pounding constant
Smothering, smoldering cloud billows upward-
choking my every thought; blinding
Numbing all my senses
My mind is so-
Foggy
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Post by Alexia on May 27, 2003 21:54:52 GMT -5
HEAVENS2BETSY GIRLIE!!!!! This is really really good......"choking my every thought"......oh do I ever know that feeling............good discription....
Alexia
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Post by Jaysie on May 28, 2003 20:55:42 GMT -5
Turn off the lights and close the door! I totally know how that feels!
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Post by Restless on May 29, 2003 20:23:23 GMT -5
thanks ladies.......unfortunately i have one right now!  |
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Post by onemorething on Jun 13, 2003 9:16:05 GMT -5
cooool! this was so well done.
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Post by Restless on Jun 13, 2003 21:27:15 GMT -5
thank you ken!!!!  |
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