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May 10, 2003 16:10:55 GMT -5
Post by romanticone1983 on May 10, 2003 16:10:55 GMT -5
beyond my eyes i see what truly beautiful truly means. i know this beauty i kiss this true beauty on her lips as night falls. as day rises in her passionately i love this true beauty beyond
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beyond
May 13, 2003 15:12:58 GMT -5
Post by Jaysie on May 13, 2003 15:12:58 GMT -5
Nice write! I really like how one thought just rolls into the next!
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May 13, 2003 22:36:13 GMT -5
Post by romanticone1983 on May 13, 2003 22:36:13 GMT -5
thank you! i've just started experimenting with different forms of poetry to expand my abilities and i'm glad that i have the support. thanks again,
pat
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