your smile

[ShInE]

your smile
a thousand watts
lighting up the shadows
pink lips and slightly crooked teeth
aglow in electric imperfection
chasing away the black darkness
a twinkle in your eye
eternal light
for me


this is my first try, just giving it a go..hope i got it right
be kind

[aj]

Forgive me for taking so long to read this, ShInE.


I liked it because this is so true about love. And I really liked the sweet closing line:
a twinkle in your eye eternal light for me
Lovely, and thanks.


-AJ