Shadows...

Char
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To repent & accept Jesus into your heart, then, so you shall have eternal life...

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Shadows... Mar 19, 2003 18:01:54 GMT -5

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Post by Char on Mar 19, 2003 18:01:54 GMT -5

[shadow=red,left,300]
Creeping 'round me
Feeling them moving in...
Like water seeping through the cracks
To fill in the spaces within my mind
Shadows darken with passing time
And I shall be no more
My time has come
To go...[/shadow]Shadows

Last Edit: May 15, 2004 23:28:04 GMT -5 by Char

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engarde poet/Gmod Posts: 428	Shadows... Mar 24, 2003 6:29:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by engarde on Mar 24, 2003 6:29:55 GMT -5 "Like water seeping through the cracks To fill in the spaces within my mind" That's a great line and really works well in your poem, thanks!
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Char poet To repent & accept Jesus into your heart, then, so you shall have eternal life... Posts: 265	Shadows... Mar 24, 2003 18:34:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Char on Mar 24, 2003 18:34:56 GMT -5 Thank you again Engarde!
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millilou mod team Posts: 471	Shadows... Apr 2, 2003 16:58:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by millilou on Apr 2, 2003 16:58:29 GMT -5 NICE! I LIKE IT!
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Char poet To repent & accept Jesus into your heart, then, so you shall have eternal life... Posts: 265	Shadows... Apr 3, 2003 18:24:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Char on Apr 3, 2003 18:24:57 GMT -5 Thanx Millilou...
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Yellie mod team Posts: 316	Shadows... Apr 18, 2003 18:34:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Yellie on Apr 18, 2003 18:34:57 GMT -5 Nothing to say but ...really good work!
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Restless mod team Posts: 579	Shadows... May 14, 2003 22:39:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Restless on May 14, 2003 22:39:21 GMT -5 love the "to fill the spaces in my mind"!!!!!!!
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Char poet To repent & accept Jesus into your heart, then, so you shall have eternal life... Posts: 265	Shadows... May 20, 2003 12:14:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Char on May 20, 2003 12:14:31 GMT -5 Thank you Restless! Charlene
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Post by Char on Mar 19, 2003 18:01:54 GMT -5

Post by engarde on Mar 24, 2003 6:29:55 GMT -5

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Post by millilou on Apr 2, 2003 16:58:29 GMT -5

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