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Post by engarde on Mar 19, 2003 5:37:20 GMT -5
Hour upon hour. I watch the clock in vain for some faint sign of deferral. Minutes mark the sluggish shadow of time irregardless of my wishes to stretch infinity and seize it this hour.
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Deborah
been around the block
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Post by Deborah on Mar 19, 2003 9:25:40 GMT -5
Thank you. I am inspired to try something new. Your talent is Awesome !
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Post by millilou on Mar 30, 2003 20:35:59 GMT -5
This is really a great poem. I've not tried this form before but have just posted my first. Did I get the form right? If not...clue me in. It's fun trying new things. Thanks!
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Post by Yellie on Apr 18, 2003 18:37:09 GMT -5
Minutes mark the sluggish shadow of time......ohh yeah.... I can feel your poem under my skin..thank you.
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