Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on May 7, 2003 20:53:55 GMT -5
when i'm not with you i get confused my head spins throbs, blows a fuse
thoughts of you flash fly past and build up i get weazy and uneasy and the lectures ring in my ears
but when i'm with you it all disappears my troubles are gone all i think about is being with you
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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Post by gooba on May 7, 2003 21:38:25 GMT -5
hey tiny great poem i can sirta relate to it to love it keep up the good work
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Post by rissed on May 7, 2003 23:52:56 GMT -5
i love this poem tiny, it's wicked. i can relate in more cases than one. keep it up.
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caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
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Post by caged on May 8, 2003 0:18:19 GMT -5
I agree with rissed I to can relate
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Post by unburntflame on May 8, 2003 1:33:14 GMT -5
wow. is all i can say.
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Post by unburntflame on May 8, 2003 1:33:34 GMT -5
wow. is all i can say.
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Post by Elisha on May 8, 2003 9:07:38 GMT -5
I really like it too.
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