Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on May 7, 2003 18:08:53 GMT -5
if he doesn't know
don't tell him
if he doesn't see
don't let him
if he doesn't show
don't make him
if he doesn't ask
don't help him
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Post by rissed on May 7, 2003 19:22:24 GMT -5
Very well written. Great style. i've read it before but it hasn't lost its touch. great work.
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gooba
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From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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Post by gooba on May 7, 2003 21:45:15 GMT -5
this is great tiny love it and riss is right no matter how many times i read it its still really good
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Tiny
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***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on May 11, 2003 20:12:39 GMT -5
i'm so glad someone appreciates this poem it was my first ever poem not on poetsanon but when i first started my poetry i found it and thought i should share it with the world so i put it on line Tiny  |
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Post by headspinner on May 12, 2003 5:35:52 GMT -5
Great Poem
If this is your first I'll have to keep reading
This poem has is veryt deep
Headspinner
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