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Post by rissed on May 4, 2003 20:58:58 GMT -5
well well well
what to do
i dunno if i'm in love with you
i found someone else
but does it seem right?
will i back away in fright?
well well well
what to say
things are changing day by day
i want some answers
and piece of mind
the one i love or the one who's kind?
well well well
be afraid
i just hope i can know
before i start to fad
again.
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Post by Devi145 on May 4, 2003 21:24:25 GMT -5
I liked this rissed, actually i love it. sometimes its hard to follow along with emotions lingering, but this..i liked, it was simple but just enough to fill the brain's appetite, wink wink nudge nudge, good job.
Liz (dev)
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JamesB
just a little green
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Post by JamesB on May 4, 2003 22:54:08 GMT -5
I really like it alot too. It is simple like Liz said, but at a second and third glance I thinks there'ss really alot more to it. Intriguing I'd say.
Oh, and generally once a month I find myself in the situation of this poem. Looking for answers, trying to decide, but (for me at least) my answer is almost always "wait it out, see what happens, and decide then".
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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Post by gooba on May 4, 2003 23:38:25 GMT -5
hey riss love the poem its pretty good
ne ways keep up the good work
luv gooba
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Krystle
brand, spanking new
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Post by Krystle on May 5, 2003 0:49:20 GMT -5
hay rissed i love this poem, it shows that you are fiting with what chose you should make and you can only make the chose that feels right to you and try not let other people get in the way of those choses.  |
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Post by Maryann22 on May 5, 2003 21:52:20 GMT -5
rissed I loved this poem, there is so much emotion in it. We all have choices we have to make and they aren't always easy. But if you just listen to your heart, it will show you the way. Maryann22
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Ignored
still rather new
Hi There!
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Post by Ignored on May 5, 2003 22:37:57 GMT -5
Hey Rissed! I like this one! It's Very emotional.
UR Friend
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on May 6, 2003 0:05:45 GMT -5
 i love it i love your poetry i love every thing you've written i LOVE it all P.S. my first poem YOU that you replied to was written about you. the first time we met. 
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