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Angel
May 4, 2003 10:46:30 GMT -5
Post by Devi145 on May 4, 2003 10:46:30 GMT -5
I thought of this when i was with my little sis in the car. Eh, yes..i was in the car with my little sis at the same time not fighting, unbelievable isnt it? (maybe thats because shes sick and we drugged her before we left...wink wink nudge nudge)
She puts on her dress all tattered and torn, but she didnt realize that shes still beautiful like before. Her eyes so gentle and caressing, her lips so soft you'd think it was a blessing. Her skin so smooth it'd keep you guessing, whats so wrong with this girl, besides her dressing? Her hair sways and clings to her face as if its life depended being settled there lightly, her body so radiant it shines so brightly...and her voice so pleasant and her touch so stunning, she'd have your heart beat up and running! I'd love to say i love her, and i wished she felt the same, while she makes me feel different and makes my life more than being rich and having fame. She looks upon with me sadness, and shame... What have i done? What do i do, please tell me because i am so confused...we can share my fortune! we can share my mansion, what is the matter of making my life an expansion!? and then she speaks while tears gracefully flow, she doesnt want money or riches, she just wants me to be happy and successful...and now i know why i cant have her, because she's my guardian angel sent from above. Not my angel sent to be loved.
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Angel
May 4, 2003 20:46:27 GMT -5
Post by rissed on May 4, 2003 20:46:27 GMT -5
sad but beautiful. nearly tears.
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Angel
May 4, 2003 21:16:35 GMT -5
Post by Devi145 on May 4, 2003 21:16:35 GMT -5
thank you rissed... i started out with how my best friend was feeling about me, cuz hes always been there to tell me how beautiful i was, and even if i was poor i'd still be his angel. So i flipped it around and twisted it up, into something i feel really strong about when i read it.
Liz
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Angel
May 5, 2003 22:06:16 GMT -5
Post by Maryann22 on May 5, 2003 22:06:16 GMT -5
I loved it. Maryann22
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
Posts: 100
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Angel
May 6, 2003 0:26:49 GMT -5
Post by Tiny on May 6, 2003 0:26:49 GMT -5
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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Angel
May 6, 2003 4:13:53 GMT -5
Post by gooba on May 6, 2003 4:13:53 GMT -5
teying not to cry lol thats a great poem i love it
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Angel
May 6, 2003 15:48:03 GMT -5
Post by Devi145 on May 6, 2003 15:48:03 GMT -5
tankies, i appreciate it. i really like it too! maybe because it was my thought? lol eh! have a good day peoples, thanks again.
Liz
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