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Post by Devi145 on Apr 30, 2003 18:01:36 GMT -5
Something for my ex, we broke up two days ago..i suppose thats why feelings are still lingering, its a quick sketch, i'll fix it later Before you leave me, i just want you to see. My love and laughter was meant for thee. You kept me happy and free, persistant with the flattering jokes, I'm not the one hiding behind these child like bicycle spokes. Im uncovering my secret and hidden thought, for everything i've learned and taught. So sit back and relax, let me tell you what my world lacks. Another you! I dont know if i could accept two, whew. It'd be tough trying to handle, but definitely worth the scandal. We could play hide and go seek, of course i'll have to peek. Trading places with similar faces, doing tricks and tying together shoe laces. I wouldnt want two of you, i dont think i could love another just as much, it'd be pointless and a different view, but i'd only want the "real" ones touch. I love you and i dont know what else to say, so I hope i can get the point across today. You make me smile, when it seems like the day isnt worth it. I like your crazy random style, even if its wacky and doesnt seem to fit. I love the way you make me feel, when my dreams seem so fake, but your always real. Your giggles and smirk, they always find a way to work, when im sad and down, your always a clown! Trying to make me hyper and happy, turning our nights into something lovey and sappy. Oh man I think i should cry, because today we said...good bye.
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Post by rissed on Apr 30, 2003 19:14:14 GMT -5
hello. i love this poem. it caught me at the perfect time, too, as it was only yesterday that me and my better half broke up and this made me feel better. thank you for posting this i feel i can breathe a bit better now.
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Post by ShInE on May 1, 2003 6:10:06 GMT -5
you can add one more to the list of people who just broke up very nice..like rissed said it made me feel better..u put the feelings into words really well
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