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Life (revised) Apr 30, 2003 15:00:59 GMT -5

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Post by H8ed on Apr 30, 2003 15:00:59 GMT -5

Is this world or life a game? Or a savage beast I cannot tame? I have walked my roads for many years, seen terrible things, and shed many tears. I have wasted many days, and tried living different ways. But never once did I fight, until it was too late and I was consumed by night. Now I sit alone and silent, becoming stronger and ever more violent. Wishing to wage a war, rape the land, settle my score. Feels like I've been here too long, I've already been on stage, and sung my song. So don't be sad or cry when I go, cause I did get one thing... this tag on my toe.

Devi145 Guest	Life (revised) Apr 30, 2003 15:27:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Devi145 on Apr 30, 2003 15:27:14 GMT -5 Sweet, I liked this one...you did a good job from my view, keep it up, i'd like to read more ;D -Dev

rissed poet you say i'm a witch like it's a bad thing! Posts: 234	Life (revised) Apr 30, 2003 19:52:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rissed on Apr 30, 2003 19:52:53 GMT -5 well written. i like the way you write dude.
	it's wise to look ahead, but foolish to see further than you can look.

Elisha poet Posts: 297	Life (revised) May 1, 2003 0:31:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elisha on May 1, 2003 0:31:20 GMT -5 Awesome! I love this.
	When the night is almost over, just before the moon goes down The wings of waking angels echo softly all around

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