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Post by Devi145 on Apr 29, 2003 18:58:19 GMT -5
Just playin' around with all the thoughts in my mind right now...here yas go, this was written for someone I have feelings for but is living somewhere else. Unforunately I'm only 15 and cant go see him lol. Behind every beautiful star, there is something you could never forget. I found you by luck but luck only keeps you unfortunately so far.....if a smile could go beyond miles and minutes, i'd smile all day just for you...if a wandering ship from the clouds could take me closer, i'd personally hire the special crew. people say im just dreaming...but i know im completely scheming...to find ways to break reality, because knowing reality it keeps me distant..from the person who truly makes me happy, it seems so persistant with its mission, but i guess thats just ambition. It's like donald duck in drag, scooby doo in "ruv", and the littlest smurf up in the front holding our flag. Things only perfectly appear when we want them too, and im so glad one of them things is you.
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Post by RiotGirl on Apr 29, 2003 19:36:59 GMT -5
You have a real talent, and I really liked the beginning, but I got a little confused toward the end . The thought pattern going through my mind was scattered. It's probably just one of those things that you had to be in your mind to get the whole picture. Anyway, the beginning was smashing. ~rg
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